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Dead Inside

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Do you see where we are?
It's the dusty graveyard.
Look inside the tomb and tell me what you see.
Do you see my heart?
Laying in the casket, along with the painful memories you gave me?

Can't you see that you've done enough?
You took my heart and let it shatter.
At this point, why bother?
With the flowers,
The roses you keep bringing,
And you never leave them water.

You let them shrivel up and die.
And now they're blackened with grief,
And strife.

This was love gone array.
And you laugh at the dead roses,
That lay at my side.
Do you have nothing better to do?
Do you have nothing better to say?

Just leave already,
And allow me to rest in peace.
Written for :iconteenage-writers:'s contest "Love gone Wrong"

They kill you from the insdie out. Why do they bother leaving flowers on your grave, if they did this? It's more symbolic than literal, but if you want to tae it for a literal murder, that's awesome and creepy, and totally fine XDD
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dreamsarefairytales's avatar
Niiice, and very 'strongly' written! I like!